Like just let me die now, this is probably the best thing I will ever know or read
Um I love like every line of this to itty bits and pieces but this part, THIS PART!!!:
"Babe, you know strippers are for tomorrow night." But his voice goes all soft at the end, the words curling and light. "Anyway, I miss you."
Right. Um. She represses the urge to make a high-pitched squealing noise. God, get it together, she thinks, he's your fucking husband! "Miss you too. Whatever."
I feel like it's kind of ridiculous to comment on how perfect your characterization is there (and everywhere) because like, duh, of course your BJ and Mindy are spot-on. But they are.
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Like just let me die now, this is probably the best thing I will ever know or read
Um I love like every line of this to itty bits and pieces but this part, THIS PART!!!:
"Babe, you know strippers are for tomorrow night." But his voice goes all soft at the end, the words curling and light. "Anyway, I miss you."
Right. Um. She represses the urge to make a high-pitched squealing noise. God, get it together, she thinks, he's your fucking husband! "Miss you too. Whatever."
I feel like it's kind of ridiculous to comment on how perfect your characterization is there (and everywhere) because like, duh, of course your BJ and Mindy are spot-on. But they are.
JUST
SERIOUSLY THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL 2 ME